Some people think that art is an essential subject for children at school while others think it is a waste of time. Discuss both views and give your opinion

There have always been debates among people about studying

art

at school. Some

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in

usefulness

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the usefulness

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of

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knowledge, but others are convinced that it is just

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of time. Both sides have their arguments,

however

, I am more inclined to agree with those who consider

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subject worth studying. On the one hand, the great majority of adults cannot credibly argue that understanding

of

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modern and

art

and

classic

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music have helped them a lot in building their career or personal life. In

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case, the idea of spending more time learning foreign languages and more practical things as math and physics seems to be quite reasonable. After all, according to common sense and

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very few professions or occupations really require diving into

art

, even though most

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schools

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the schools

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have obligatory subjects of

art

in their programs regardless of

inclinations

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of every particular child.

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, music was my most hated subject in school and seemed not to have influenced

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my personality at all.

On the other hand

, a well-rounded person who has in-depth knowledge and skills in arts definitely develops one’s brain in

such

ways that enhance creativity and imagination. These qualities are very valuable in the modern world and could become a strategic advantage in fighting for higher positions and better jobs. A good illustration of

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correlation is research, conducted in American schools. It discovered a significant improvement in test results within math and science classes

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were involved in

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arts

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curriculum. In conclusion, both points make sense,

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I believe that arts have a great impact on human’s outlook and schools have to provide opportunities for all to have access to

art

subjects, taking into account talents and desire of pupils and their parents.