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Art is considered an important part of society as well as an expression of its culture, Do you think it is important for a children to be taught art? Do you think children should be focus on art rather than other subjects?

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 is significant plays an essential role in people's life as it helps to understand their culture and roots. In my opinion, every child should teach
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 to express their thoughts and to show their creativity.
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, in the school curriculum, other subjects are
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 important for professional development.
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 provides information about the culture and history of any community. It
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 gives us information about what the people of the previous generation used to do in their time.
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, we can see the paintings made by the people in various caves which gives the idea about what they were knowing at that time.
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, learning
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 develops creativity and dynamic thinking which is very useful for personality development.
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 gives us the chance to do
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experiment and express things in a creative way.
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also
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 helps to express our opinion and feelings. Young children do not have
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good command of language but they can easily express their thoughts using paintings and other activities. It
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 helps phycologist to understand what that particular person thinks.
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, if the person is sad and feels distressed, it is clearly visible from the painting made by him. In conclusion, I believe that
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art
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 is important to understand culture and children should learn the
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. While in the school curriculum, we can not consider
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 as a core subject as other subjects
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 maths, science etc. are
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 important.
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