Nowadays young people are leaving their homes from rural areas to study or work in the cities. Why does this happen? Do advantages of this development outweigh its disadvantages?

It is true that young

people

are increasingly likely to work and study in m

etropolis r

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ather than in rural

areas

. In my opinion, there are several reasons for

this

trend to take place, and I consider it to be more b

enefitial

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beneficial

than harmful. The industrial revolution has had an effect on

people

’s decision of where they want to p

ursuit

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their career.

Firstly

, the e

merge

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of various new industries in

cities

has created more job opportunities for t

he y

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oungsters. U

nemployment

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The unemployment

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ratio in the metropolis

areas

in recent years is actually much lower than in the rural

areas

,

therefore

, it a

ttract

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more

people

to work and study there. Another reason is that technology development p

rovide

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a better living standard in

cities

. Faster network connection, better transportation are some of the most common e

xample

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to show how technology had affected the l

ive

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in the

cities

c

ompare

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to the countryside.

Finally

, the environment provided in city workplaces is better for learning and working. There are many devices that can provide h

elps

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for individuals in their tasks, and

also

more experts a

lways

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willing to a

ssists

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them. From my point of view,

this

should b

e consider

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as a f

oward

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forward

progress. The large source of labour

that is

flowing in

cities

provide the needed conditions to

further

increase the development of technology as well as the productivity of factories to

further

expand their market and get a better income. Some

people

concern about the dense population in the metropolis

areas

can have negative effects,

however

, with t

he u

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rbanization taking place,

this

problem can b

e solve

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with more accommodation, more jobs, and better services. In conclusion, the development in

cities

is attracting more

people

to live and study there, and

this

is a positive trend.