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the seaside resort of templeton between 1990 and 2005.

The given maps illustrate the alterations of the seaside resort of Templeton between 1990 and 2005. Overall, there was a noticeable change after the construction takes place. The significant difference can be seen in the addition of the new infrastructures. According to the maps, it can be seen that there was a
river
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 that runs from the north to the south which connected to the sea to the bottom. After development, on the left side of the
river
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, the houses and some tree around the lake to the north was replaced by the three-building, with the houses was relocated to the centre-left to make way for the new smaller road along with a supermarket and three enormous building beside it. On the right side of the
river
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, a railway station and a railway track were situated to the west end, which was extended to the southwest after passing 15 years.By 2015, the car park which stood
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 to the station remained unaffected as does the hospital to the northeast and the school to the northwest.
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, the airport was constructed on the north end bank of the
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.
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, the green area and the houses to the south was demolished to make way for the factory, to the southeast the ferry pier was built in
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 area of the sea.

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