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In many countries, old or traditional languages are dying out or being forgotten, especially by younger people. Is this an acceptable development which occurs inevitably, or is it something which we should try to prevent?

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In the past, most nations had their own traditional
language
, which many of them are currently becoming extinct
due to
 the modernization of the young generation.
This
 essay will discuss whether
this
 issue is acceptable or should be avoided. On the one hand, the destruction of traditional and old
languages
 by the young generation can greatly help to make communication between
people
 of different societies easier. With all
people
 mastering a few comprehensive
languages
, anyone anywhere can communicate with another person,
for example
, as if everyone could speak English.
Furthermore
, the death of old
languages
 helps the development of different societies. Many
people
 have many prejudices about their native
language
, which sometimes leads to non-native
people
 not being able to easily settle in that place.
This
 sometimes even causes mental problems
such
 as depression. On the other side of
this
 debate, the extinction of the traditional
language
 of a country is like the loss of a large part of the
culture
 and history of that society. Most of the beautiful values and differences that can be seen between nations are because of their specific
culture
 and customs, which if they disappear completely, all will remain
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like a world with only one country.
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, The diversity of different
languages
 makes
people
 eager to learn them. The desire to learn about a country, its history,
culture
 and
language
 is a choice that many
people
 go towards with interest and it helps the whole world to know what events the planet they live in has experienced.
To conclude
, even though the loss of old
languages
 can help the easy communication and integration of
people
,
but
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the history,
culture
 and what we achieved in the past will be lost, so it is better to try for its survival.
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