Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together? To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Nowadays,
people
have different views about whether melodies play a crucial role for
bringing Change preposition
in
people
of a variety of cultures
and ages
altogether. I think although
music
is an important way
for bringing people
who accustomed another
culture and who have different Change preposition
to another
ages
from others together, it is still is not a
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apply
necessary
.
On the one hand, it cannot be denied that Replace the word
necessity
music
play
an important role in every society, Change the verb form
plays
therefore
, authorities take place some international music
competitions
like Eurovision and it is undeniable that many countries musicians can be attend
these Change the verb form
attend
competitions
. More importantly
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,importantly
people
who have different ages
and cultures
can be met in the same place in this
way
. For example
, if this
type of music
competitions
is stopped and removed completelyFix the agreement mistake
competition
them
, Correct pronoun usage
apply
people
who are attending this
type of music
competitions
cannot take a chance for gathering other Fix the agreement mistake
competition
people
who have different ages
and cultures
. Consequently
, still
melodies are Add a comma
,still
a
best Change the article
the
way
for meeting and gathering different people
who are living other
countries and accustomed Change preposition
in other
other
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to other
cultures
.
On the other hand
, it is no secret that people
have different music
tastes in order that some young generations are reluctant to listen to old generation melodies. This
means that some people
who have different music
tastes cannot meet and gather in the same place for same
purposes Correct article usage
the same
such
international
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as international
music
competitions
. For instance
, if one tries to gather people
for this
purpose
, probably this
person can face some problems because of different pleasures such
as some disrespectful situations, this
means, some youngsters can be done some disrespectful things to other people
who are aged and accustomed different
countries. Change preposition
to different
As a result
, music
is not the best way
for this
purpose
always, thus
, other great ways can be thought by government
and Correct article usage
the government
people
for this
purpose
.
In conclusion, I think even tough
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though
music
play
an essential role in Change the verb form
plays
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today's
todays
world and can be useful for meeting Change to a genitive case
today's
people
in different cultures
and ages
, is still unimportant and other ways can be find
for Change the verb form
be found
this
purpose
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