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In many countries, old or traditional languages are dying out or being forgotten, especially by younger people. how do you agree with this statement

#countries #languages #people
Nowadays, especially among youngsters, ancient traditional
languages
 are becoming extinct. Every year several numbers of traditional and local
languages
 are unremembered or die. As the world evolves, young
people
 lose their mother tongue that they don’t care about, and it is a dispensable part of development. On the one hand, young
people
 lose their interest in using traditional
languages
;
this
 is because the world is moving towards globalization and
therefore
people
's communication is not only at the local level and they have to be bilingual and turn to other dialects in order to interact with the world. The
second
 reason could be that, because the local
language
 gives fewer opportunities to the society for finding a decent or international business , they are not interested in using it. Nowadays, in the age of science and technology, the efficiency of the local dialect has no place,and young
people
 must look for a
language
 to perceive cutting edge science so understanding an international
language
 become more critical and they gradually stop using their mother tongue or local dialects.
However
, many believe that nations and governments should try to keep and preserve local
languages
 and dialects via different procedures
such
 as teaching traditional
languages
 to students. Still, nothing can prevent the old
languages
 from becoming alive during the cutting edge are. To conclude,
according
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 globalization ; international
languages
 must be learned , the government must be able to keep students active in their local
language
 through proper education
however
 by no means new generations will forget their local
language
 gradually.
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