The most important aim of science should be to improve people's lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Scientific breakthroughs are rapidly changing our lifestyle on

this

planet in the twenty-first century. Many

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that alleviating the quality of citizen's

life

ought to be the priority of scientific

endeavors

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. I wholeheartedly endorse

this

viewpoint owing to the higher levels of convenience and affordability associated with it. On the one hand, scientists constantly introduce advanced technologies that facilitate our lifestyle and make it more comfortable in various aspects.

For example

, the introduction of virtual communication applications and social media platforms offers the opportunity to contact

with

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anybody globally regardless of

the

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geographical location.

Moreover

, these communication devices are used not only in personal interactions to

impeove

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improve

life

but

also

in professional capacities.

As a result

, many

multi-nationals

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and entrepreneurial enterprises nowadays allow their employees to select remote or hybrid options

as well as

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career meetings virtually.

Hence

,

this

contributes to a higher quality of

life

as people face fewer challenges

such

as commuting or being in stressful workplaces.

On the other hand

, technological breakthroughs which are a direct outcome of scientific accomplishments make citizen's way of

life

extremely affordable.

Although

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cutting-edge computers and cell phones used to cost a fortune a few decades ago, thanks to science, the latest versions of the state-of-the-art technology

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currently affordable for the overwhelming majority of the population,

for instance

.

Furthermore

, if scientists figure out methods for

mass-production

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, it can result in an enormous scale of manufactured items which leads to a dramatic reduction in the cost for ordinary

consumer

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.

Thus

, less expensive prices

also

constitute a tremendous contribution in order to provide a prosperous

life

for the average citizen. In conclusion, I unequivocally advocate that the utmost importance during scientific projects and discoveries should be given to humans and enhancing their livelihoods. Meanwhile,

this

fast-paced trend not only resulted in a more convenient lifestyle but

also

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to

a

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much broader access to once extravagant and luxurious devices. I forecast even more extraordinary and mind-boggling achievements in a not-distant future.