You had some photos of your family taken by a professional photographer. Write a letter to the photographer. In your letter: Say that you liked their photos of your family Ask them to be your photographer at a special family event Give them the details of the event.

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Dear Sir or Madam A professional

photographer

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came to our house to take family photos. The

photographer

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is a very hardworking person. He told us how to stand and tried to get a good picture of us lying on the ground. We really liked the picture. Nature is behind us, everywhere is green,

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and we

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are all wearing white clothes. The design is very beautiful. My

parents

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really liked it, they even loved the

photographer

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like their own children. Our family is deeply grateful to the

photographer

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. We organized an

event

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at our house.

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organized

event

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is about the day my

parents

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met for the first time. Their love for each other is eternal. We would be very happy if you would come. We ask you to be our

photographer

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at the

event

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. because you are a very professional

photographer

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. We need a professional

photographer

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and we like your work. My

parents

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celebrated their first date at

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age. We invited a

photographer

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to our house but my

parents

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didn't like it.

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day is very important for us. Please be our

photographer

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at the

event

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and thanks in advance. Yours faithfully, Afruza

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Task Achievement

For task achievement, ensure that your letter directly addresses all the prompts given in the task. Mention your appreciation of the photos clearly, request the photographer's service more directly, and provide specific details about the event.

Coherence and Cohesion

For coherence and cohesion, work on the logical flow of your letter. Organize your ideas into clear paragraphs, each focusing on a specific aspect of the task. Transition smoothly between your expressions of satisfaction, request for services, and details of the event.

Writing Tone

Maintain a suitable tone throughout your letter. While your tone is generally appropriate, ensuring consistency and clarity can help the reader understand your intention better. Avoid excessive praise that may seem unrealistic.

The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

Dear + name
Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

193 words

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The Greeting

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