You had some photos of your family taken by a professional photographer. Write a letter to the photographer. In your letter: Say that you liked their photos of your family Ask them to be your photographer at a special family event Give them the details of the event.
Dear Sir or Madam
A professional
photographer
came to our house to take family photos. The photographer
is a very hardworking person. He told us how to stand and tried to get a good picture of us lying on the ground. We really liked the picture. Nature is behind us, everywhere is green, we
are all wearing white clothes. The design is very beautiful. My Correct word choice
and we
parents
really liked it, they even loved the photographer
like their own children. Our family is deeply grateful to the photographer
.
We organized an event
at our house. This
organized event
is about the day my parents
met for the first time. Their love for each other is eternal. We would be very happy if you would come. We ask you to be our photographer
at the event
. because you are a very professional photographer
. We need a professional photographer
and we like your work.
My parents
celebrated their first date at this
age. We invited a photographer
to our house but my parents
didn't like it. this
day is very important for us. Please be our photographer
at the event
and thanks in advance.
Yours faithfully,
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Task Achievement
For task achievement, ensure that your letter directly addresses all the prompts given in the task. Mention your appreciation of the photos clearly, request the photographer's service more directly, and provide specific details about the event.
Coherence and Cohesion
For coherence and cohesion, work on the logical flow of your letter. Organize your ideas into clear paragraphs, each focusing on a specific aspect of the task. Transition smoothly between your expressions of satisfaction, request for services, and details of the event.
Writing Tone
Maintain a suitable tone throughout your letter. While your tone is generally appropriate, ensuring consistency and clarity can help the reader understand your intention better. Avoid excessive praise that may seem unrealistic.
The Greeting
Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.
Always start an informal letter in the ways:
- Dear + name
- Hi / Hello + name
‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.
For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:
- Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
- Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.