Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extend do you agree or disgree with this opinion?
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music
is a quality tool to gather people
in different both society and generation. I completely agree with this
opinion and think that music
can connect the cultures and ages gap. This
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First
of all, I believe that music
can be a representative of culture since they have got an aura of each area through lyrics, rhythms and sounds . For example
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, Sounds can give us a well-feeling when we listen to the
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music
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the open-minded
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