Some
people
hold
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that
governments
should pay more attention to addressing environmental
problems
and housing issues to stop illnesses and
diseases
. I do not
agreeAdd the preposition
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toagree
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this
idea,
although
it can be useful in some aspects.
Governments
should pour money into
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systemChange the noun form
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,
such
as vaccines and medical check, which is
to
people
’s health. Today technologies have developed rapidly and m many
diseases
can be checked in the early
in the early Remove the redundancy
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stage, thereby recovering from complaints easily. Those
people
who live in the technology world are more likely to check their body
problems
by
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check. If they discover the illnesses early, they have opportunities to cure that. Apart from that,
governments
spend money on vaccination keeping
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far away from
diseases
.
For example
, Covid-19 is spread all over the world and there is
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treatmentAdd an article
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for that. The authority brought vaccines from medical companies and argue
people
taking shots.
People
who get
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is
totalReplace the word
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free and
that is
theCorrect article usage
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good way to control the virus.
Another method of
preventChange the verb form
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illnesses is that the
government
should improve
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healthyReplace the word
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awareness. In a competitive society, most
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peopleAdd an article
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devote their time to working leading under strain. Those who have sub-health because they have to keep the same action for
longAdd an article
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time,
such
as sitting before computers. If
people
do not care
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situation, it will cause serious
problems
even death. The
government
should help
people
to raise
the Correct article usage
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awareness by social media or establishing laws.
For instance
, the
government
regulate employers which can not ask employees
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over 40 hours per week so those policies can keep
people
having awareness of
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problems
and
people
are more likely to follow
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good lifestyle.
On the other hand
,
people
can keep
diseases
away by reducing environmental
pollution
and housing issues because of avoiding
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virusFix the agreement mistake
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. With the
and economic boost, there
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an increasing number of private cars and residential
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, which causes
pollution
, especially smoggy.
As a result
, the
government
should keep watchful eye on reducing biological and housing
pollution
on private cars and develop eco-friendly cars and on building materials
whichCorrect pronoun usage
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are less damage to the environment.
In a conclusion,
governments
should have various methods to deal with
diseases
and
decreasingWrong verb form
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pollution
and housing
problems
justChange preposition
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only two ways among different policies.