A Canadian friend recently sent you a present by post. You want to thank him/her. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter -say how you felt when you received the present -describe what you like about it -explain how you will use the present

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Dear Stephen, I’m writing to you to express my gratitude for sending me LG mobile

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set, which was launched

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month. I was extremely happy when the courier person handed me that mobile set. I do understand that I already had a conversation with you about the excellent features of

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phone

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, but I never thought that you’re going to purchase one for me. Main features,

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multi-function device had many features

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as sharp picture quality,

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state-of-the-art sound system, and

easy

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an easy

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interface that can be used without opening the instruction manual.

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, the lightweight and portability of the

phone

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set are outstanding.

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, it’ll be utilised in my regular activities for contacting people and my social media use.

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, it will assist me to do my official tasks whenever I wish.

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a couple of questions related to

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phone

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set,which I am still waiting for in the meantime. All the best! Ryan Smith

toriqul1976Tue Nov 16 2021

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

157 words

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