Some people believe that everyone has right to university education. Therefore, government should make university education free for everyone, no matter what their financial background is. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays having a higher
education
degree is an essential factor to achieve a good job position in several fields. Some
people
argue that governments are responsible for providing free
university
education
for everyone.
Although
I think
this
is a good idea, I believe it is impossible in many
countries
because of some important problems. On the one hand, I believe the financial background of
people
should not affect their opportunity for higher
education
. because the value of every single individual in society is equal, so governments should treat  them equally.
Education
in
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school levels is free in most
countries
and
people
consider it as a right, no matter how much money they have. So it can be a good idea for
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countries
to provide
a
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same conditions in higher
education
.
On the other hand
, in many
countries
because of the limitation of overall budget and expenses of
university
education
higher
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education
budget is low.
Therefore
authorities have to select a limited number of students for free
university
education
based on their educational background.
Also
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applications in some fields of study
such
as medical science are much more than the capacities of universities and the job market, so a  competition based on their educational ability and background should be necessary. In conclusion, some
people
believe that governments should allow everyone to go to
university
for free, but except some developed
countries
, it is impossible for other
countries
to execute
this
valuable idea
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