In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What are the resons for this? How can people research this?

In recent years, with the growth of the economy, a large number of buildings are built not only in developed countries
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but
also
in developing countries.
Therefore
, some historic buildings had to be torn down. It is a pity that our
next
generation may not have the opportunity to visit some of the places of interest. In order to learn more about the
history
, many
people
would like to get to know the
history
of the house or building that they live in. There are many reasons for
this
.
First
of all, many
people
are interested in
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history
. They are eager to figure out what had happened in the past
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so that they could benefit
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it.
History
is considered
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a mirror for them and they could learn a lot from it. The
history
of the house they live in is the most familiar thing for them. It is a good opportunity to understand what was happening in the
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of their
houses
.
Furthermore
, the
history
of the
houses
is
also
important to the future of the
houses
. When developers want to accomplish urban redevelopment, it will be great to respect the
history
of the
houses
on the site and
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environment. For the sake of understanding the
history
of the
houses
. many ways can be used for
people
to make some research on it. Most importantly,
people
can get various information
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the Internet. Nearly everything can be
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though
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the Internet.
Moreover
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is
also
a good choice to search the literature. Some old books may be
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in
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but cannot be found
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the Internet. I believe that it is important to know more about the
history
of the
houses
we live in
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because sometimes the
houses
can shape who we are and
who
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we want to be in the future.
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