Some people believe that not all criminals should be kept in prison, but that some should be allowed ti do unpaid work to help the Community

At the ,present some individuals think that not all lawbreakers should be in

jail

, but a few have to do

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unpaid jobs to assist society.

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essay will completely agree with

this

statement by discussing how people can

change

, and the benefit of supporting the community. The

first

reason is people can

change

.

This

means, that the deleted inmates can

change

to be a better [part of society] person who wants to improve his society[ community].

For example

, my uncle was a convict in Melrose prison because he stole money from an old man. After he was forced to support

the

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society without getting paid, he realized that breaking the law is a mistake.

As a result

, my uncle has more respect

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the law and community, indicating that unpaid work could

change

the mindset of a criminal. Another reason is some criminals can be helpful to the public.

For instance

, my friend is an offender who hacked the bank to steal money, but

instead

of going to ,

jail

the warden decided to give him immunity in exchange for his help to make the system better, so no one can hack it.

Thus

, rather than sending him to ,

jail

he aids the warden to make the organization impossible to hack. In conclusion,

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totally agree that a few offenders should not go to

jail

because they can

change

to be

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greater people, and some lawbreakers can be accessible to make the world a safer place. In my opinion, while the government send all the felons to

jail

, some of them can be useful to make the universe more secure.