Some people say that music is good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together? To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Nowadays,
people
have different views about
music
playing a significant role in bringing individuals of various
cultures
and
ages
together or not. I think
although
, it seems that musical way is considered the significant thing to get population together, it is unimportant way collecting
people
together who have not same
cultures
and
ages
. On the one hand, there is no musical language for anyone so that
people
of every country can listen to any
music
, which the lyrics are not understanding for everyone. Most importantly, listening to
music
is unlimited in order that
people
can gain some knowledge and broaden their horizons by listening to different types of country
music
.
For example
, if a person listens to the “Mugam” that national
music
kind of Azerbaijan,
this
person will be aware of the culture of Azerbaijan. Listening to
music
is not only a good way for getting
people
of different
cultures
but
also
ages
together.
Consequently
, listening to
music
is vitally necessary for individuals and it brings
people
to the same thinking whose
cultures
and
ages
are different.
On the other hand
, other types of countries have different
cultures
and between older citizens and youngsters have huge musical differences and because of these reasons to listening to the
music
is not considered a vital role for bringing society together.
This
means that
,
Remove the comma
apply
show examples
most of the time older
people
have a tendency to listen to slow
music
such
as classic or retro,
nevertheless
young
people
are accustomed to listening to active
music
like rock, jazz or rap.
For example
, if a character prefers to listen to classic
music
,
as a
result
Add the comma(s)
,result
show examples
it will be difficult to get together other persons who tend to listen to rap
music
. In conclusion, I believe even though melody plays a crucial role in the life of
people
to bring them to the same opinion whose art and
ages
are different, it is still substantial and undeniable by listening to
music
a body cannot get the same thinking.
Submitted by faridqahramanov7 on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+

Learn how to write high-scoring essays with powerful words.
Download Free PDF and start improving you writing skills today!
Topic Vocabulary:
  • universal language
  • evoke
  • connect
  • diverse audiences
  • cultural exchange
  • generational gaps
  • shared experiences
  • unifying force
What to do next:
Look at other essays: