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Housing is essential for people.some argue that the government should offer free housing for people who can not afford it.do you agree or disagree with this statement

#people #argue #government #offer
Every individual
dream
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dreams
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 of a
house
 to live peacefully with their family.Having a
house
 is very important and is a basic necessity nowadays.Many
people
 who have good income can afford a big beautiful
house
 but low-income group
people
 or poor find it difficult to buy a
house
. In my opinion, the
government
 should give free housing to the poor,who sleep on the roads and have a hand to mouth situation as it is helpful for developing a better society.
In addition
,it will reduce the garbage or litter which they make alongside roads.Due to poverty they sleep and eat outside so there are more chances of road accidents and developing serious ailments among the poor.If the
government
 provides a home for the poor they can have money to educate their children in schools that ultimately develop a better community.
Furthermore
, studies have
also
 shown that poverty affects the psychology of
people
 at a very young age that leads to serious crimes like robbery, murder, rapes etc so providing homes to the poor leads to a decrease in the crime rates.
Government
 take taxes from
people
 so they can use
this
 money to build homes for the needy.There will be less corruption and scams related to illegal land if
government
 use
this
 for building homes for the needy. In conclusion, I agree that
government
 should give houses to
people
 who cannot afford them but
this
 could be possible only with the contribution of elite
people
 which ultimately leads to the welfare of the society.
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