In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case ? Do you think this a positive or negative situation ?
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or an apartment, people in some countries strive to buy a house over renting one. I think such
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trend is positive,
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an asset
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future life.
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To begin
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what
the future holds. Owners of flats or houses do not have to worry about increasing Change preposition
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For example
, my sister and her husband were renting a flat for a year. In August owner
of the flat suddenly informed my sister’s family, that they have to find another apartment and move out in one month. My sister barely has found a new flat in Correct article usage
the owner
such
little time. This
situation would not have happened,
if my sister's family had lived in their own housing.
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Besides
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home
can be a great investment in the future. Prices for apartments are rising annually, so in ten on
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owners can get more money than they spent on buying that real estate. Add a comma
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For instance
, in Russia in last
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the last
years
prices for housing is growing steadily. So real estate agencies, who bought the flats in 2014, are now selling them for twice as much.
In conclusion, owning a house can make your life more stable and easier. Add a comma
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Moreover
, a personal flat or a home
is a profitable investment for you or your kids.Submitted by tatianaraysan2002 on
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