Your friend has been offered a place on a course at the university where you studied. He/She would like your advice about finding a place to live. Write an email to your friend. In your email • describe where you lived when you were a student at the university • recommend the best way for him/her to look for accommodation warn him/her of mistakes students make when choosing accommodation.

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Dear Jenna, Hope you are doing fine today. I was thrilled to hear from you and delighted to know that you have been offered a History course at the JNT university where I studied and am glad that you reached out to me for advice regarding accommodation. During my studies at that university, I was staying in an apartment in West Street, London along with another student. It was a two-bedroom flat along with being fully furnished located in one of the peaceful areas in London.
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, there are a few mistakes that you need to avoid.
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,most students do not check the market and end up paying huge rent because of
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, get a background check of your roommate for security reasons.
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, obtain detailed information about the area in terms of safety measures. As you have asked for a recommendation to seek places, I have recently used an online agency named Fresh Start which helped me move here and it seems to be the best way. Attaching the details of the agency. Best wishes, Farhana Jabeen
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  • house-hunting
  • budgeting
  • commute
  • utilities
  • security deposit
  • lease
  • proximity
  • amenities
  • landlord
  • tenant rights
  • real estate agent
  • furnished/unfurnished
  • flatmates
  • on-campus/off-campus living
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