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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems,as well as practical problems. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement.

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Speaking another dialect apart from one indigenous
language
 in another nation can cause both factual and societal issues. In my opinion, I partially disagree with
this
 statement as a foreign wording can
also
 be beneficial by giving the
people
 opportunities to know more about other community cultures,it can
also
 lead to experimental and civil challenges.
To begin
 with, a foreign
language
 results in social issues.
This
 means that individuals would not be able to communicate freely with other citizens in the country.
For example
, a young Yoruba lady in Germany will find it difficult to interact with the community because of
language
 barriers.
Hence
, it will affect her self esteem.
In addition
,speaking another
language
 can
also
 lead to experimental problems. What
this
 implies is that person would find it difficult to carry out tasks within the nation. To illustrate
this
, human beings will not be able to buy things in the market or go to any official gatherings due to the inability to communicate and understand other folks.
However
,
this
 may lead to culture shock due to the inability to get things right.
Nonetheless
,speaking other
people
language
 could be beneficial. For individuals that can learn and understand other
people
 easily, it will make life easier for them, and possible for them to incorporate other
people
's cultures into their way of life .most
people
, for ,instance love to know more about other
people
 ways of life and to be bilingual. In conclusion, living in another country that requires other
people
language
 can result in both realistic and societal problems.
Nevertheless
,it can
also
 be beneficial by giving chances to know more about other
people
 cultures.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • linguistic proficiency
  • cross-cultural communication
  • miscommunication
  • social integration
  • linguistic alienation
  • cultural dissonance
  • language acquisition
  • communication breakdown
  • interpreter services
  • language courses
  • bilingualism
  • multilingualism
  • language barrier
  • effective communication
  • cultural assimilation
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