Write about the following topic. Some people think that art is an essential subject for children at school while others think it is a waste of time. Discuss both views and give your opinion Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Art

has become increasingly popular nowadays. That's why, some people start to advocate that

art

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is

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crucial for

children

, while some are of the opinion that it causes them to spend their time inconveniently. I reckon that

art

is an indispensable part of heirs is because it improves kids' creativity and enables them to use

this

skill as a

job

opportunity.

First

and foremost, the majority of people are thinking that only science or math courses are important and

art

, music or

sport

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activities should not be covered in classes since it doesn't make any contribution to

children

. Quite the contrary,

researches

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researchers

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have pointed out

such

activities, namely painting or charcoal provide lots of

benefit

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benefits

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for

children

. It influences their cognitive behaviours, let them improve their hand talent and enable them to gain different perspectives. Artists' imaginations and sights are different from

us

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. They can easily create something new, distinguish the differences between colours and they can reflect their thoughts by not talking.

Such

behaviours like that can not be learned by solving math problems.

On the other hand

, due to

the

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these courses offsprings have an opportunity to see that

job

options are not only posed by doctors, engineers or lawyers. If kids have an interest in

art

they should be encouraged to see that

this

is not merely a hobby they can do

this

for the rest of their time. Unfortunately, parents

are disagree

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disagree

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with the argument that

art

is not a

job

it is just an entertainment activity.

Therefore

, they discourage their offspring.

For example

, even though my cousin has a huge interest in

art

her parents didn't let her

to

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apply

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enrol

Art

Faculty, but after she graduated from the university she applied to the faculty and she took an acceptance. To sum up, people have different ideas about

art

. Some of them think that it should be teaching

children

at school whereas others are in the opponent idea. Yet, ı reckon that it helps younger students to gain new skills and change their views and it

also

enables kids to sustain these attitudes as a

job

when they grow up.