Some people think that intelligence is innate while others think that we can improve our intelligence through learning.

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has always been controversial
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because it can be considered as a thing acquired as an inheritance, or as a technique developed by honest
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. In
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essay, I will cover both points of view, and give my opinion on
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. On the one hand, you can notice in different
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a certain predisposition to various kinds of activities. According to the theory of nine types of
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, someone is better at learning languages, someone has more developed empathy, and for
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arithmetic equations have always been the easiest of the school curriculum. We
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know that genes transmit Intellectual Ratio
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because very often the children of genius scientists are
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genius.
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, always
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who really worked and tried always achieved their
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, many
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do not accept when they
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, "How talented you are", because all
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was given to them with great effort. Often
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who do not develop their abilities in any way end up not as developed as persistent and diligent
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. If a person has a sincere desire to achieve something,
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he really will spend hours and years in order to achieve the goal. In conclusion, having analyzed both sides, I am inclined to conclude that certainly different
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have varying degrees of ability to occupations, but at the same time, of course, with constant perseverance and effort, you can achieve maximum results, and
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develop
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
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