In many parts of the world, children and teenagers are committing more crimes. What are the causes? How should these young criminals to be punished?

With the development of today's world, because many reasons affect,
children
and adolescents prone to be more violent. The following article will discuss some of the reasons for
this
and how to handle them properly.
First
of all, the beginning of violence and society vice's that directly affect
children
is probably due to the movies, social networks, and games they are playing or using. Some of these things will contain images that are not suitable for
children
such
as smoking, stabbing each other, shooting guns, cursing, etc. When watching these things too often or too much, they will think it is obviously to be done and recreate it exactly like in the movies or games they play. Unfortunately, there are so many violent movies and games these days that we can't control what
kids
watch.
In addition
, friendship will
also
affect
children
a lot, especially with adolescents. If they hang out with
kids
who are smart and studious, that's fine, but if they hang out with
kids
who are violent, mean, and want to drop out of school, it's even worse. These bad friends will entice the child with their
behavior
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and convince the
kids
that the
offense
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is normal and will be better than school. There are so many temptations that solutions should
also
be given in a reasonable way so that the
children
and adolescents after being punished can have more correct thoughts. The
first
thing is not to hit them or yell at them, that only makes things worse,
instead
of that, we should explain to them that these
behaviors
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are not good and keep them away from the influences which affected
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them badly
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.
Then
show them positive
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and be the
first
model for them, encouraging them so they can change
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. If they still can't change, the best thing for them is juvenile detention. There they will understand many values of life and will be forced to change their
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if they want to leave jail. In conclusion, we can't keep
children
from being exposed to criminal
behaviors
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because they are so numerous and uncontrollable, so the only thing we can try to do is perhaps limit our exposure to them as much as possible and have timely actions to prevent the child if the child commits a crime
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