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With access to the internet and social media websites, many children are exposed to a number of dangerous situations. Adults should thus limit access to the internet for their children. Do you agree or disagree?

#access #internet #media #websites #children #situations #adults #limit
In the past,
kids
 used to play outdoor games in their free time, which indeed used to keep the kid active physically and mentally
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, but in today's
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 social media and easy
internet
access
has
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 taken place of outdoor
play time
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 of the
kids
 and diverting their childhood to the dangerous and mature
content
 available on
internet
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 these days.
Hence
, I strongly agree with the point that we should limit
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access
 to the
internet
 for our
child
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children
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. Low
internet
 cost, attractive network plans and high availability of mobile network
has
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 increased
an
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easy
access
 to
internet
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 almost everywhere and to everyone. The
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smart phones
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 available in
market
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in
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very
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 low cost is making
it
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 even more affordable and
accessable
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accessible
. Now are days
kids
 are finding social media
websites
 and networking sites more attractive because of the
irrelevent
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irrelevant
 and inappropriate
content
 available on
internet
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the internet
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 , which
sometime
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 can put
kids
 in
dangerous
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situation
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. Various gaming apps like pubg etc. are having violent
content
, which leaves
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 bad impact on youngsters
mind
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 and making them violent. In my opinion, we cannot stop people or the
websites
 owner to publish irrelevant
content
 on their
websites
 and social networking sites, but can definitely stop our
kids
 to have limited
access
 or only have
access
 to
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age appropriate
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content
. We can have
childlock
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child lock
child-lock
 on various apps
in
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 our phones and can educate them to understand good or
the
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bad
content
 available on
websites
.
Also
 can make them understand the consequences of having
acccess
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access
 to
irrelevent
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irrelevant
content
 and can encourage our
kids
 to go out for outdoor games,
instead
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to
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 giving them
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smart phones
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • dangerous situations
  • limit access to the internet
  • inappropriate content
  • online predators
  • physical and mental health
  • monitoring and guiding
  • online safety
  • school curriculum
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