Production of carbon dioxide and other greenhouse gases has a heating effect on the atmosphere and results in global warming. Why global warming is considered one of the most serious issues nowadays? How can this problem be solved?

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the event of 21st
century
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the
earth
temperature
is constantly increasing every year as a report released by World Health Organisation (WHO). One school of thought reckons that global warming is increased due to the high productivity of carbon dioxide and
other greenhouse chemical
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that
released
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in the environment causing heating highly heating
effect
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to
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atmosphere
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the atmosphere
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.
However
, according to the current situation global warming is
highly
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debatable topic. The facts of
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will be elaborated in
upcoming
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next
paragraphs. Considered Broadly, according to media reports
glacier
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glaciers
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start melting due to high atmospheric
temperature
and it can be serious damage to the
earth
through various circumstances as well as global warming is seen as a major
problem
in
current
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the current
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time because
imbalance
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in the
earth
temperature
is causing damage to the ozone layer
that is
reflecting harmful
rays
of
sun
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.
Furthermore
, the ozone layer had already
damaged
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in
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some
part
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of the
earth
whereas the sun
rays
directly
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on
earth
and it is a serious
problem
. For an instance, the health authority released a report about the harmful
rays
that
is
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falling down on
earth
, these
rays
may
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cause
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be cause
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a serious skin
problem
to any living being that may be lead to the death of that living species.
Similarly
, direct sun
rays
contain harmful gases
that
is
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highly
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a highly
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critical
problem
for any individual person.
In addition
, there is
press
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note released by the officials, in
this
press note there is
few
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thing
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are written that can help us to overcome
with
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this
problem
.
Firstly
, the government authorities should restrict the cutting of a forest because
human
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started cutting
a forests
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forests
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at
high
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a high
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scale that caused highly increment in
temperature
.
Moreover
, the government should
also
have to take
a
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strict action
towards
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to control
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controlling
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pollution
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problem
.
Additionally
, every individual person should have to plant a tree in their
surrounding
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it will help to conserve our environment and
also
help us to maintain atmosphere
temperature
. To illustrate, some organisations in the world running campaigns to save a tree and save the
earth
as well as they
also
encouraging people to plant more and more trees. Whereas,
this
campaign is accomplishing success and every person are
awared
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aware
about the consequences of
this
problem
. To conclude, global warming is a serious
problem
the governments are taking strict action on
this
problem
, as well as people's are contributing with the
govermnment
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government
to save the
earth
.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • greenhouse gases
  • atmospheric heating
  • global warming
  • extreme weather events
  • rising sea levels
  • ecosystem disruption
  • heatwaves
  • droughts
  • species extinction
  • economic implications
  • disaster relief
  • tipping points
  • renewable energy
  • energy efficiency
  • carbon sequestration
  • reforestation
  • afforestation
  • sustainable agriculture
  • methane
  • nitrous oxide
  • international agreements
  • Paris Agreement
  • emissions reduction
  • lifestyle changes
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