Production of carbon dioxide and other greenhouse gases has a heating effect on the atmosphere and results in global warming. Why global warming is considered one of the most serious issues nowadays? How can this problem be solved?

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is constantly increasing every year as a report released by World Health Organisation (WHO). One school of thought reckons that global warming is increased due to the high productivity of carbon dioxide and

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

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Topic Vocabulary:

greenhouse gases
atmospheric heating
global warming
extreme weather events
rising sea levels
ecosystem disruption
heatwaves
droughts
species extinction
economic implications
disaster relief
tipping points
renewable energy
energy efficiency
carbon sequestration
reforestation
afforestation
sustainable agriculture
methane
nitrous oxide
international agreements
Paris Agreement
emissions reduction
lifestyle changes

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