A magazine wants to include contributions from its readers for an article called 'The book that influenced me most'. Write a letter to the editor of the magazine about the book that influenced you most. In your letter describe • what the book was about explain • how this book influenced you • say whether this book would be likely to influence other people

Dear Sir, I am Amira Elattar and I am writing
this
letter to share my thoughts about the
book
that had got all my impressed, and greatly influence me. I remember I was about 28 years old when I read the
book
named The Secret by Round Byrne. Mainly the
book
was about the secret of a successful life, which aims to control your mind, and how anyone can achieve their goals by improving and developing their mind. Indeed,
this
book
was a turning point in my life. I actually start organizing my goals depending on their priorities with a lot of persistence. I tend to believe that people who could decide to read
this
book
will discover their own abilities, features that they do not know about themselves,
moreover
they will achieve many goals as well. I hope
this
is a useful contribution to your article. Yours sincerely, Amira Elattar.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • influenced
  • contributions
  • readers
  • 'The Alchemist'
  • Paulo Coelho
  • embarks
  • journey
  • personal legend
  • valuable
  • life lessons
  • inspiring
  • pursue
  • themes
  • following one's heart
  • seeking adventure
  • embracing the unknown
  • resonate
  • wide range
  • potential
  • inspire
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