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Many parents feel that cell phones are harmful to children, while others do not. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

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Some parents suggest that electronic devices might have a negative impact on the
health
 of kids.
However
, others believe that it doesn't affect
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their bodies in a bad way. These two sides of the issue will be discussed as follows and I will give my own viewpoint. Nowadays, parents start to provide phones to their children at
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 very young age. It is caused
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 because adults want to know the location of the kid, his mood, his safety.
Moreover
, it is really
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convenient
 to watch cartoons
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 the Internet, read some books, learn new material, and find a lot of
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new and helpful information.
For example
, families do not always have
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 or laptop, so children can search for the different
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entertainment
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YouTube, there are a lot of shows and free access to everything.
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, most of the
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 are translated
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another languages
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, so it is a good chance to learn something new.
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 hand, offsprings start to be really addicted to
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cell phones and forget about their surroundings. The
first
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 the Net
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 plenty of
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advertisment
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advertisement
, which make people want to download a new application or watch something else.
In addition
, kids forget about real life, become very
agressive
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aggressive
 and rude to the older generation.
Also
.
such
 devices have a negative influence on
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health
, it might cause brain
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 and vision loss.
For instance
, many parents in China do not allow toddlers to use devices after 8pm to let the mind stay productive on the other day
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great
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. In conclusion, I am in all
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 with the idea that phones should be limited on time to reduce the risk of
health
 problems and let children grom in a
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invironment
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environment
.
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