People today spend less and less time interacting with other people in their neighborhood and this has a negative impact on community. What are the causes and solutions?
It is considered that individuals are less communicate with other
people
living beside their houses.In this
essay, I will discuss the causes such
as social isolation, technology and solutions to this
issue.
On the one hand, people
are spending less time with other people
specifically with their neighbours
because of technology .In other words
, technology has changed the lifestyle of people
as well as
children.Additionally
, people
mostly spend their time using mobile phones and find less time to interact with their neighbours
as a result
, social isolation is increasing in societies which leads to depression, anxiety and stress among people
however
social interaction brings happiness and life satisfaction in the communities.For example
, most people
prefer to find assistance online about their illness rather than their neighbours
.Thus
, not interacting with neighbours
leads to losing of sense of belongingness.
Moving toward the solution to this
problem, the Government should arrange festivals in which people
with diverse skills such
as dancing , art and poetry participate to share their knowledge and experience with their neighbours
for instance
, parents who are worried about how to raise their children can easily get some advice from neighbours
.secondly
, the government should run awareness programmes about the neighbourhood, engaging with neighbours
promote mental as well as
emotional health because of sharing problems and sorrows.This
creates a strong bond between them as they can also
share their daily routine.
To sum up
, interacting with other people
, especially neighbours
has both negative such
as social isolation and positive effects like social bonds in societies but connecting with them leads to strong emotional stability.Submitted by madihaali8470 on
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Coherence and Cohesion
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Coherence and Cohesion
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Introduction
You've effectively introduced the problem by defining what the issue of lack of communication in neighborhoods entails.
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The essay thoroughly covers both causes and solutions, demonstrating a comprehensive understanding of the topic.
Conclusion
The conclusion provides a satisfactory summary and reflects understanding of the connection between social interaction and emotional well-being.
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