People today spend less and less time interacting with other people in their neighborhood and this has a negative impact on community. What are the causes and solutions?
It is considered that individuals are less communicate with other
people
living beside their houses.In Use synonyms
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essay, I will discuss the causes Linking Words
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as social isolation, technology and solutions to Linking Words
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issue.
On the one hand, Linking Words
people
are spending less time with other Use synonyms
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neighbours
because of technology .Use synonyms
In other words
, technology has changed the lifestyle of Linking Words
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Additionally
, Linking Words
people
mostly spend their time using mobile phones and find less time to interact with their Use synonyms
neighbours
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as a result
, social isolation is increasing in societies which leads to depression, anxiety and stress among Linking Words
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however
social interaction brings happiness and life satisfaction in the communities.Linking Words
For example
, most Linking Words
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prefer to find assistance online about their illness rather than their Use synonyms
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Thus
, not interacting with Linking Words
neighbours
leads to losing of sense of belongingness.
Moving toward the solution to Use synonyms
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problem, the Government should arrange festivals in which Linking Words
people
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as dancing , art and poetry participate to share their knowledge and experience with their Linking Words
neighbours
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for instance
, parents who are worried about how to raise their children can easily get some advice from Linking Words
neighbours
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secondly
, the government should run awareness programmes about the neighbourhood, engaging with Linking Words
neighbours
promote mental Use synonyms
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emotional health because of sharing problems and sorrows.Linking Words
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creates a strong bond between them as they can Linking Words
also
share their daily routine.
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To sum up
, interacting with other Linking Words
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has both negative Use synonyms
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as social isolation and positive effects like social bonds in societies but connecting with them leads to strong emotional stability.Linking Words
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Coherence and Cohesion
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