Many people feel it is a waste of money to try to save endangered animal species, for example the tiger or the blue whale. To what extent do you agree and disagree with this statement

The importance of , which was always debatable, has now become more controversial. The substantial influence of trying to save endangered

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has sparked

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controversy over the potential impact of

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trend on our world in recent years. It can

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that trying to preserve

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from danger is a waste, but it has some drawbacks as well.

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and negative impacts of

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issue and

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will lead to a logical conclusion. At the outset, there are numerous ways to explain why saving endanger

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is waste, but the most prevalent one is rooted in the fact that many

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in the world now has been in extinction zone, which now more and more people strive to extend the fund for

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. As an illustration, research in

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area invariably reveals that many people wanted to put

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and try to save them, out of the zoo but save in their jungles.

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a couple of years ago, so how can these

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live in their home.

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, opponents of

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from distinction is necessary.

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, according to new research from Harvard University, many

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from the distinction zone have now been rescued and kept in the preservation areas, their circle of life could still be saved.

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, it is obviously true that saving endangered

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is

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thing we need to deal

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thinking about the wealth. In view of

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outlined above, one can conclude that

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of

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from danger is a waste is prominent,

although

it has a number of drawbacks that should be well handled.