You are shifting out of your accommodation. You think your current place of residence is suitable for your English speaking colleague who is arriving next month. Write a letter to your colleague. Explain why you are shifting out Describe your accommodation Explain why it is suitable for your friend

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Dear Sir or Madam, I hope

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letter finds you in radiant health and the best of spirits. I heard from Sonia that you have found a job in Chandigarh. Congratulations

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getting

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a good workplace. Unfortunately, I have to

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to Jalandhar

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month. So, I shall not be able to meet you. My company gives me a promotion and a transfer. So, I have to

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by the end of December. The flat in which I have been dwelling since 2019 is very amazing. The landlord is quite nice and provides me multifarious facilities,

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as a gym, a swimming pool, a parking slot for a car and so on.

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, my apartment is two BHK and

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very nominal. Every room is installed with electronic equipment like a LED, a down celling etc. So, I would suggest you

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here after I leave. You could sign a lease after you

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here. I can ask my house’s owner to hold the house for you.

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rental home would be very beneficial for you.

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is mainly because it is situated in the centre of the town so your office as well as grocery stores are very close and can be approachable effortlessly. I would appreciate it if you could accept my suggestion. In case you decide to stay in the rental home, please let me know so that I can talk to my landlord about it. Yours faithfully, Prabhjot Kaur

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
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in additional
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for example
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therefore
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

248 words

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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There are fewer controls over the designs and construction of home and office buildings. So, people can build them however they like. Do the advantages of this outweighs the disadvantages?

The linegrahp below shows the differences in the consumption of three fast food among Australian teenager. Write a report describing the information shown below. Write at least 150 words.

Some prents buy their children a large number of toys to play with. What are the advantages and disadvantages for the child of having a large number of toys ?

Some people believe that unpaid community service should be compulsory in high school programmes (for example, working for a charity, improving the neighbourhood or teaching sports to younger children). Do you agree or disagree?