Human activity has had a negative impact on plants and animals. Some people think that this cannot be changed, while others believe actions can be taken to bring about a change. Discuss both and give your opinion.
There is no doubt that humanity has a negative influence on the environment.
Someone
Correct pronoun usage
Some
believe
that there is a chance to prevent the consequences and to save nature and animals, at the same moment others think that the damage that Change the verb form
believes
people
made can be fixed.
I believe that it is no longer possible to undo what humans have done to the environment, and it is impossible to restore what has been destroyed, but there is a possibility to minimize human impact on Use synonyms
the
nature and wildlife. One of the world problems is the population growth that leads to the need for more space for humankind Correct article usage
apply
that is
why animal habitats are destroyed, forests are cut down, and lakes or other bodies of water are dried up. There are different possibilities to minimize Linking Words
such
destructive influence. Linking Words
For instance
, Linking Words
people
may build more tall residential buildings. Japan is Use synonyms
the
country of skyscrapers because of lack of space, and it is Correct article usage
a
the
example Correct article usage
an
how
to diminish Change preposition
of how
impact
.
Add an article
the impact
However
, Linking Words
to bring
some changes in humans’ Change the verb form
bringing
behavior
will be really difficult. We are used to doing what we want without caring about the consequences and the fact that someone suffers. Change the spelling
behaviour
For example
, many Linking Words
people
know that Amur tigers are in the red book, on the verge of extinction. One of the main factors of Use synonyms
this
is poaching. The extinction of the animal species occurs only because of the whim of manLinking Words
,
because the skin of Remove the comma
apply
this
animal is valuable and exotic.
In conclusion, I would like to say that we can diminish our impact on animals and plants and in the future to try to bring about a change. It needs to be the effort of all Linking Words
people
and countries and do not repeat the old mistakes. I hope to see Use synonyms
such
changes.Linking Words
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