Human activity has had a negative impact on plants and animals. Some people think that this cannot be changed, while others believe actions can be taken to bring about a change. Discuss both and give your opinion.

There is no doubt that humanity has a negative influence on the environment.

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that there is a chance to prevent the consequences and to save nature and animals, at the same moment others think that the damage that

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made can be fixed. I believe that it is no longer possible to undo what humans have done to the environment, and it is impossible to restore what has been destroyed, but there is a possibility to minimize human impact on

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nature and wildlife. One of the world problems is the population growth that leads to the need for more space for humankind

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why animal habitats are destroyed, forests are cut down, and lakes or other bodies of water are dried up. There are different possibilities to minimize

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destructive influence.

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may build more tall residential buildings. Japan is

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country of skyscrapers because of lack of space, and it is

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to diminish

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some changes in humans’

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will be really difficult. We are used to doing what we want without caring about the consequences and the fact that someone suffers.

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know that Amur tigers are in the red book, on the verge of extinction. One of the main factors of

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is poaching. The extinction of the animal species occurs only because of the whim of man

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because the skin of

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animal is valuable and exotic. In conclusion, I would like to say that we can diminish our impact on animals and plants and in the future to try to bring about a change. It needs to be the effort of all

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and countries and do not repeat the old mistakes. I hope to see

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changes.