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Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology/ In what ways technology affected the types of relationships people make? Has this become a positive or negative development.

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Technological development today has provided us with many interesting inventions that make many things easier than they were before. A few of the many inventions like Mobile phones, Laptops and some other communication gadgets revolutionized the way
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, a Mobile phone today is ubiquitous which makes it much easier for
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 to connect with one another instantaneously. Unlike the beginning of invention, it is even possible to make live video phone calls despite
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 being miles apart.
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 together without having to worry about travelling, working long hours, studying abroad, and many more. As a comparison
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, when I was a kid, my elder brother was pursuing his Master's degree in a different province and I remember how difficult it was to talk to him regularly. While the whole family waited a whole week to just talk 5 to 10 minutes, I thought how amazing it would be to magically be with my brother and fortunately, that magic is available now.
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, some
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 might argue that the availability of
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 makes
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 lethargic and forget the human connection. While I agree with
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 notion to an extent, I believe that the affection one has over the other person will definitely outweigh the disadvantage. Even if the
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 is not available, there is no guarantee that the
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 will stay connected. To nullify the argument, let me present my own example;
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 I have been living alone abroad for 5 years, I still talk to all my family members every day and share our feelings. In conclusion, though there may be some have negative sides to interacting with
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 using
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, I believe that they are supposed opinions.
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 ,in my opinion,
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 brought
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 together in a good way.

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Answer the 'Problem and Solution' topic

Problem-and-solution essays fall naturally into two parts, the first describing and exploring the problem, the second setting out the solution or solutions.

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  • Introduction
  • Body paragraph 1 – Problems
  • Body paragraph 2 – Solutions
  • Conclusion

Examples to start your body paragraph:

  • One of the first problems of the...
  • Another problem that needs to be considered...
  • A possible solution to this problem would be...
  • One immediate practical solution is to...

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • technology
  • interact
  • relationships
  • connectivity
  • communication
  • online
  • face-to-face
  • friendships
  • romantic relationships
  • family dynamics
  • positive
  • negative
  • development
  • effects
  • formation
  • ease
  • impacts
  • communities
  • connect
  • interaction
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