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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems, To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

#country #language
Living in a foreign
country
 or
ven
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even
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 visiting a foreign homey can be joyful,until
language
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the language
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 is not a barrier to us.Most of us have might
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 through
this
 situation.And it can cause social or practical problems for us.
First
 of all,English is a global dialect that has been used by many people in the world.
However
 things might get change when you are staying in a non-
english
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English
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 speaking
country
,or even if you are in
india
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India
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 different states have
variety
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a variety
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 of tongues.
This
 can cause us many issues like gender discrimination and racism.For ,example when I was visiting Mumbai,at
first
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 don't feel any difficulty as
i
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 was moving through the city.As most of them understand English.But when
i
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I
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 decided to travel through rural areas things get changed because
,
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 I can't even marginally speak or understand Hindi.
This
 lead me to a series of troubles,Locals try to exploit me as a stranger who doesn't belong to their cast or group,on the basics of
language
.
This
 circumstance made my entire journey a disaster. I strongly believe that learning 2 or more languages will be always helpful to us in any
cases
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.All the social and practical complications can be avoided by letting the
language
 of whatever
country
 you living in or visiting.Before you leave to a
country
 you should at least learn the basics of their
language
such
 as,to greet them ,or to ask routes at an emergency state.
Therefore
 I strongly agree with the statement but these problems can be eradicated to some extent,
such
 as learning their
language
 or while travelling to accompany a local tour guide with you.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • linguistic proficiency
  • cross-cultural communication
  • miscommunication
  • social integration
  • linguistic alienation
  • cultural dissonance
  • language acquisition
  • communication breakdown
  • interpreter services
  • language courses
  • bilingualism
  • multilingualism
  • language barrier
  • effective communication
  • cultural assimilation
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