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Some scientists think that there are intelligent forms on other planets and messages should be sent to contact them. Other scientists think that it is a bad idea and would be dangerous. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

#scientists #forms #planets #messages #contact #idea
The entire scientific community is divided into two on
this
 matter.Some say's that we should communicate with other intelligent forms,
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while
which
 others are against it.In my
opinion
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 we should try to
contact
 other life forms on other planets,as it will only increase our knowledge in
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feild
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field
fields
. On one hand,they could
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posses
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 more advanced
tecnology
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technology
 than us.And
also
 might have more understanding about other plants.So trying to
contact
 them can
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achieve
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 us many
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milestones
 in the
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field
 of science.In
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 communicating with extra-
terretrials
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terrestrials
 will help us to understand the complexities of galaxies and the universe.Maybe in the
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future
 we can use
this
 information to
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start
 a human
clivition
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clinician
 on another planet Alternately, people believe that since we do have no knowledge of these extra-terrestrial forms, any communication with them could be seen from their end, as a provocation, which may lead them to attack, and as we suspect their technology to be highly advanced, we would not be able to survive
such
 a battle.
However
, since these are just theories, no conclusions can be made in
this
 regard. In conclusion,
although
 they are varying opinions on whether we need to
contact
 extraterrestrial beings, I feel that attempts should be made to
contact
 them, because if we lead to the advancements in science, and we will get a better understanding of the galaxies around us
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