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Writing Samples
Band 7.5

In your letter. • welcome them and introduce the library • provide information about membership requirements and library facilities • write about the opening hours and borrowing politics of the library

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Dear Mr. John Welcome to our
library
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! Our
library
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 is an excellent place for readers, especially for those who prefer a quiet and comfortable environment. It contains more than 3,000
books
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 and instructional materials. The
library
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 is spacious, modern, and well-equipped with various facilities. If you would like to join our
library
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, we offer two types of registration: offline and online. You can register online from anywhere, and all the necessary information is available on our website: www.
books
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.com. For offline registration, you will need to visit our
library
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 in person. To register, please bring your ID.
However
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, if you are under 12 years old, you must
also
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 bring a letter of authorization from your parents.Once your registration is complete, you will have access to the following benefits:
Firstly
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, you can read
books
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 in the
library
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 every day.
Secondly
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 you are
also
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 allowed to borrow
books
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 and take them home. Our
library
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 is open every day from 8:00 AM to 10:00 PM.To borrow a book, you must first return the previous one. If you have any questions, feel free to contact us. Yours faithfully, Jurabek Jabborov

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coherence and cohesion
Consider breaking down the information about membership requirements and library facilities into clearer sections. This will enhance readability.
task achievement
Make sure to specify the duration for borrowing books (e.g., how long you can keep a book) to provide a complete answer about the borrowing policy.
task achievement
The introduction and closing are warm and welcoming, setting a positive tone for the letter.
coherence and cohesion
The letter is well-structured, with clear sections that discuss different aspects of the library.

Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

  • A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
  • The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
  • A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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