Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children who are taught to co-operate rather than compete become more useful adults. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

There are various people upbringing, their

children

. In Taiwan, many parents think

competition

is essential to making their

kids

successful. In comparison, others believe that

children

who are taught cooperate and become more useful adults. It is debatable whether the way parents' education.

This

essay will provide both views and explain my opinion after the argument. The benefit of

competition

can bring a pleasing effect,

such

as increasing emulation capability and lead to another result.

For instance

,

children

may get a good grade on the exam, so they will not help each other or teach another kid.

On the other hand

, some

kids

might use the wrong way to win the

competition

, like cheating. In

this

situation, it will substantially impact

children

's behaviour, which is not the main reason we should teach our

children

.

By contrast

, many people who believe that collaboration has a more significant influence on

children

believe that solving the problem in teamwork efficient is better than alone. In school, the teacher always teaches

kids

to cooperate to finish a report, and

kids

can learn many things in teamwork,

such

as learning social skills in partnership. During their adult's ages, they may be more ready to solve the problem with coworkers.

Nevertheless

, too much assistance may cause

children

to do not have independent thinking skills. To sum up, both

competition

and participation have their advantages and negative.

However

, teaching

children

to cooperate is rather than compete helps the

children

be more challenged and more willing to take advice from others.