you are having a party at your home to celebrate your birthday and you want to use a catering company to organize the food. You had some excellent food at a catered party last week at a friend's house.

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Dear John, Hope you are doing fine.

Firstly

, I would like to thank you for inviting me to your birthday

party

although

it sounds formal I really wanted to say it as I didn’t get a chance to at the

party

as you were busy welcoming the guest. It was a spectacular and stress buster

party

I would say for me. As I was completely into

workaholic

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mode for the past 6 months failed to socialize. I really admired the ambience, decoration and especially

food

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the

party

. As you already know I will be turning 30

week, I would like to through a

party

inviting my colleagues and our college friends to it. So, I would like to know what the name of

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company is you hired to organize the food and how do I contact if you could provide the details I can get in touch with them for organizing one for my birthday.

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that

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also

would like to how much did it cost for you

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the catering company. I am planning to invite around 50 people almost the same number as your

party

. If you can give me the details it will be helpful. More

importantly

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I expect your presence

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the

party

and give it a blast. Looking forward to hearing from you. Yours Lovingly Alan smith

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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228 words

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you are having a party at your home to celebrate your birthday and you want to use a catering company to organize the food. You had some excellent food at a catered party last week at a friend's house.

Fully explain your ideas

Children are facing more pressures from academic, social and commercial sources. What are the causes of these pressures and what measures should be taken to reduce it?

In many countries, plastic containers have become more common than ever and are used by many food and drink companies. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

The topic of renewable energy is widely discussed these days. What are the main reasons behind the increasing use of renewable energy sources, and is this trend a positive or negative development for the environment?

Some pople think that wild animals should not be kept in Zoos. Others, believe that there are good reasons of having Zoos. Discuss both views and give your opinion.