Many large cities around the world lack affordable housing. What problem does a lack of affordable housing cause? How can these problems be overcome? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Everyone hopes to own their own
house
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, the rapid
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has led to the
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price
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in
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developed cities. The majority feel pressured that they could not afford the expensive
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prices. Without
a fixed houses
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, they have to abandon
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superior jobs and return to their hometown. In my opinion, the root of
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problem is that
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government
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lack
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relevant files to balance the
economy
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. The developed cities’
house
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price
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affect people in the following two ways. One of them is that the developed city will
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the
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talented person. Lacking
of
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adorable housing, the excellent talents have to resign from their fabulous jobs and back to
hometown
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their hometown
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. Another
effection
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affection
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is that a portion of
them
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buying
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house
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a house
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under the
pressure
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.
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, they pay for
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loans which
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higher than salaries that cause great
pressure
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both on their physical and mental.
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, the urgent task is to solve the problem that people could afford the
house
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loan. Some policies and means are needed to solve
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serious problem.The
government
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proposal relevant policies in
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talents
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able to share their housing
pressure
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. Meanwhile,
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government
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should control the growth rate of the
economy
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toprevent
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to prevent
the monopoly of housing market occurrences. In conclusion, there is still an irresistible
pressure
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on the housing
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of
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developed cities. As far as I 'm concerned, the
government
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manipulate the
economy
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both benefits the
develop
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of the city and reduce people's financial
pressure
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at the same time.
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