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The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time

The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time
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The first line graph compares the percentage of three electrical appliances over the period of 99
years
. And the
second
 chart shows the time
spending
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spent
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 on washing clothes, preparing meals and cleaning per
week
 from 1920 to 2019. It is evident that in 1980 and 2000, the percentage of
refrigerator
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refrigerators
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 and washing
machine
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machines
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 increased to the peak respectively.
While
 the time
spending
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spent
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 on housework has decreased over the 99
years
. In 1920, the ownership of
refrigerator
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refrigerators
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 was the lowest, with almost 0%, and the amount of vacuum
cleaner
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cleaners
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 was the highest
for
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at
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 approximately 40%.
However
, just in 40
years
, the number of washing
machine
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machines
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 overtook vacuum
cleaner
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cleaners
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 as the primary
households
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household
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 appliances. For
percentage
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the percentage
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 of washing
machine
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machines
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, there has been a steady increase from about 30% to 100% between 1920 to 2000. Between 1920 and 2019, the
hours
spending
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spent
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 on housework fell from nearly 50
hours
 per
week
 to 10
hours
 per
week
. There was a rapid decrease from 1920 to 1960 that it reduced almost 30
hours
 per
week
for
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doing housework. After that, the time of
houseworks
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housework
 was stable for the
next
 59
years
.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words years, week, hours with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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