Mrs Barrett, an English- speaking woman who lives in your town, has advertised for someone to help her in her home for a few hours a day next summer Write a letter to Mrs Barrett. In your letter suggest how you could help her in her home say why would like to do this work explain when you will and will not be available

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Dear Mrs Barrett, I am writing to you as I am able to help you with some work on your house. I am working like a gardener and I can help you to take care of your

garden

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. So

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, I could move your lawn and collect all of the leaves around the house and put them in my trailer. Next work what I could do is maintain your trees and bushes. I would like to help you with all of that work because you are almost my neighbour and

secondly

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, because your

garden

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isn't so big and will be very quick to look after your

garden

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. Because I am so busy during the week, I will be available every Saturday morning from 9am all the following summer. Please let me know if is suitable for you and I will be happy to help you with your

garden

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. Kind regards Petr Kroupa

andrea.kroupovaFri Sep 20 2024

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task achievement

Consider including a bit more detail about your previous gardening experience to further strengthen your suitability for the task.

coherence cohesion

To further improve coherence, make sure each paragraph has a clear main idea and smooth transitions between them.

coherence cohesion

You start and end the letter appropriately with a greeting and closing.

task achievement

Your tone is polite and suitable for the context.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

153 words

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