Plastic shopping bags are used widely and cause many environmental problems. Some people say they should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

When had been flying over the

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, I observed unlimited areas of

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trash. The harm to

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nature

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caused by

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waste is obvious.

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many people argued that

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bags should be banned. I mostly agree with that idea. The main reason

that

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if not properly

disposed

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,

plastic

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easily

get

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into

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waters, where it

concentrated

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is concentrated

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into floating islands by the

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currents. Floating

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bags are similar to jellyfish and are eaten by the

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creatures

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as tortoises, many kinds of fish etc. Some of them get entangled with

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objects. That

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leads to the death of many sea dwellers and

extinction

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some

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of them. The

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reason is that

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is

highly

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durable material. One specific

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bag can float in the sea

several

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for several

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decades and cause

many

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death. The victims of

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bags are from small

crustacean

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to the biggest whale. So, the harm from

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appear

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to be

immence

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immense

. What lead to degradation of sea fish

resourses

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resources

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starvation of people in some regions. But if thoroughly utilized the deadly consequences can be avoided.

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, many developed countries spend substantial sums of money and take real steps to proliferate

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nature friendly

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culture among their nations. That cause people treat

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waste thoroughly. In

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countries

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the harm to

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is minimized to about zero. I conclusion, I would say that despite that there are technologies

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provide

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nature friendly

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plastic

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utilization, many thousands of tons of

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waste yearly get into the

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reality

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humanity must take quick steps to prevent contamination on the world

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. One of the main steps to prevent future pollution of the

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waters is banning

of

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apply

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the

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apply

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plastic

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use in countries

which

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are incapable to utilize

plastic

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thoroughly.