Plastic shopping bags are used widely and cause many environmental problems. Some people say they should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

When had been flying over the

ocean

, I observed unlimited areas of

plastic

trash. The harm to

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nature

caused by

plastic

waste is obvious.

As a

result

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many people argued that

plastic

bags should be banned. I mostly agree with that idea. The main reason

that

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if not properly

disposed

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,

plastic

easily

get

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into

ocean

waters, where it

concentrated

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is concentrated

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into floating islands by the

ocean

currents. Floating

plastic

bags are similar to jellyfish and are eaten by the

ocean

creatures

such

as tortoises, many kinds of fish etc. Some of them get entangled with

plastic

objects. That

finally

leads to the death of many sea dwellers and

extinction

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some

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of them. The

next

reason is that

plastic

is

highly

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durable material. One specific

plastic

bag can float in the sea

several

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decades and cause

many

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death. The victims of

plastic

bags are from small

crustacean

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to the biggest whale. So, the harm from

plastic

appear

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to be

immence

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immense

. What lead to degradation of sea fish

resourses

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resources

and

finally

starvation of people in some regions. But if thoroughly utilized the deadly consequences can be avoided.

For example

, many developed countries spend substantial sums of money and take real steps to proliferate

nature friendly

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culture among their nations. That cause people treat

plastic

waste thoroughly. In

such

countries

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the harm to

the

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nature

is minimized to about zero. I conclusion, I would say that despite that there are technologies

which

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provide

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plastic

utilization, many thousands of tons of

plastic

waste yearly get into the

ocean

. Given

such

reality

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humanity must take quick steps to prevent contamination on the world

ocean

. One of the main steps to prevent future pollution of the

ocean

waters is banning

of

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the

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plastic

use in countries

which

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are incapable to utilize

plastic

thoroughly.