In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think advantages of driverless vehicles outweight the disadvantages?

How can change our
future
with new
technology
? some
people
are thinking about
future
Correct article usage
the future
show examples
of all
cars
, and public transportation's
vehicles
. Some experts and scientists say that in the
future
all
cars
will be
driverless
and humans who are living on the Earth will be travel by these
vehicles
just be passengers.
To begin
with, by spreading new
technology
in our world and life,
people
want to change their facilities and
vehicles
.
Therefore
, some car's companies have been producing new
cars
that are
driverless
, and only
people
travelling inside these
vehicles
will be passengers. In my opinion, there are some advantages and disadvantages to that process.
Moreover
, when our
cars
or other transportation's
vehicles
control by AI ( Artificial Intelligence),we will be lazy and
finally
will be faced with new problems.
Therefore
, using
driverless
cars
have some rules and difficulties. I suppose some problems that arise from new
technology
that are using
driverless
vehicles
will be realised.
In addition
, we can use
technology
such
as AI equal to old
technology
in our
cars
.
For example
, Ilon Mask has been produced and invented new
cars
, those
cars
are working by artificial intelligence
technology
by using Google Maps and other techniques to find destinations without using our brain. I think some
people
prefer to drive their car
instead
of using new
technology
. In spite of that idea, I suppose new
driverless
vehicles
will be a part of our
future
. To conclude
this
essay, in the
future
humans will drive and use new
vehicles
by their mind and
finally
Add a comma
,finally
show examples
that
technology
can affect on our children those will leave on the Earth.
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