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In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think advantages of driverless vehicles outweight the disadvantages?

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How can change our
future
 with new
technology
? some
people
 are thinking about
future
Correct article usage
the future
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 of all
cars
, and public transportation's
vehicles
. Some experts and scientists say that in the
future
 all
cars
 will be
driverless
 and humans who are living on the Earth will be travel by these
vehicles
 just be passengers.
To begin
 with, by spreading new
technology
 in our world and life,
people
 want to change their facilities and
vehicles
.
Therefore
, some car's companies have been producing new
cars
 that are
driverless
, and only
people
 travelling inside these
vehicles
 will be passengers. In my opinion, there are some advantages and disadvantages to that process.
Moreover
, when our
cars
 or other transportation's
vehicles
 control by AI ( Artificial Intelligence),we will be lazy and
finally
 will be faced with new problems.
Therefore
, using
driverless
cars
 have some rules and difficulties. I suppose some problems that arise from new
technology
 that are using
driverless
vehicles
 will be realised.
In addition
, we can use
technology
such
 as AI equal to old
technology
 in our
cars
.
For example
, Ilon Mask has been produced and invented new
cars
, those
cars
 are working by artificial intelligence
technology
 by using Google Maps and other techniques to find destinations without using our brain. I think some
people
 prefer to drive their car
instead
 of using new
technology
. In spite of that idea, I suppose new
driverless
vehicles
 will be a part of our
future
. To conclude
this
 essay, in the
future
 humans will drive and use new
vehicles
 by their mind and
finally
Add a comma
,finally
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 that
technology
 can affect on our children those will leave on the Earth.
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