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Immigration has a major impact on the society. What are the main reasons of immigration. To what consequences can it lead.

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In my view
immigration
 certainly has a positive impact directly on society.
This
 is due to the fact that it can improve a country both socially and economically. Without a doubt,
immigration
 is a tool that advances society.
People
 migrate to several countries across the globe, searching for better education and job opportunities. Till now these two has remained as a primary reason. Some countries offer work permits and residential status, based on an individual's motive for
immigration
. These acts have an adverse effect on improving a nation's economy. On one hand, the quality of education has always been a concern around the world. Students in their quest to gain more knowledge move across countries, learning the culture and language. Once an individual graduates and gets hired in his field of work, he starts to contribute both socially and economically.
On the other hand
, there are
people
 who immigrate looking for better career options. Eventually, these
people
 turn out to be taxpayers and their contribution to advance the society and economy is enormous. According to
this
, the consequences will be more on the positive side in form of a boom in the IT sector, which adversely has an effect on business administration and human resources.
Likewise
,
this
 can have a greater impact on local sellers and manufacturers.
Clearly
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 when there is a space for
immigration
, there is
also
 a space to evolve in a cultural aspect. When
people
 from various cultures converge together, it will diversify the culture.
Thus
 to conclude, the impact of
immigration
 on a country is humungous and it is beneficial for its native and immigrant community.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Economic migration
  • Asylum seeker
  • Diaspora
  • Expatriate
  • Refugee status
  • Work permit/visa
  • Demographic shift
  • Naturalization
  • Xenophobia
  • Cultural assimilation
  • Multiculturalism
  • Social cohesion
  • Immigration policies
  • Border control
  • Undocumented immigrants
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