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Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Other believe that some infornation is too important or to valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion.

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Sharing
information
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 is becoming increasingly important in many nations. According to some
people
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,
information
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 is beneficial when it is shared with the public to utilize them especially in terms of scientific, technical and academic
information
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.
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, others believe that it is better to keep the
information
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 confidential. In
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 essay, both viewpoints will be discussed in detail before a conclusion is reached. There are some
people
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 who argue that the benefits of
knowledge
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 sharing are developing the field of science faster when
people
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 do not need financial assistance to acquire the necessary
knowledge
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. There are many intelligent scientists who do not have the funds to obtain vital
information
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 to complete their researches.
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, the
information
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 is free,
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 is not a barrier to their progress.
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, the scientists can achieve their researches.
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, a group of IT professionals can do the research by using free
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 from the internet t develop an app that can diagnose a dangerous disease. Even though in the situation free
knowledge
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 is beneficial, but it is not exact in all cases.
On the other hand
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, there are some drawbacks to having free
information
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.
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, some organizations try to conceal
information
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 because they believe they have invested in resources to research in a specific direction and they should receive the advantage of their investment.
Secondly
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, some types of
information
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 on the wrong hand can be devasting to society. Some research correlates with hazardous fields
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 as nuclear physics. On good illustration of
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 is that criminals were able to learn how to produce explosives using free
information
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 on the internet. In
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 case, clearly should not be allowable to access all
information
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 to everyone. In conclusion, I strongly disagree with the idea that all
information
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 should be accessible as much as possible. It seems to me that
people
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 should be aware to underestimate the value and power of
knowledge
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.
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