WRITING TASK 1 You should spend 20 minutes on this task. You have decided to apply for a job as a Spanish instructor that was advertised in the magazine Teaching S.A. Write a letter to apply for the job. In your letter: explain why you are writing describe your experience and qualifications explain how they can contact you. Write at least 150 words.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing
this
letter in reagrds to the vacency of a Spanish
Instructor at MGM school that was advertised in the magazine Teaching S.A. on the 15th of April. I hereby extend my interest in this
position and I am attaching my resume and cover letter.
I currently work as a senior Spanish
teacher at our local government high school and have 6 years of experience in teaching subject at the highest level. I have completed my BA in Spanish
7 year ago and will be completing MA in a span of next 3 months.
I am apply for this
job as I intend to work with schools that has high standard of education and I believe my current qualification and experience as a Spanish
teacher will be right to cater to the students of your school.
I can showcase my knowledge on the subject during the interview, If I am selected for interview please feel free to reachout to me anytime on the below attached my contact details.
Mobile :- 123456789
E-mail :- [email protected]
Looking forward for a positive reply.
Yours sincerely,
Abhilash.Submitted by rathan6886 on
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task response
Ensure that the content is reviewed for minor spelling errors like 'reagrds' and 'vacency'.
coherence cohesion
Improve sentence structure to avoid run-on sentences and enhance clarity. For instance, 'I currently work as a senior Spanish teacher at our local government high school and have 6 years of experience in teaching subject at the highest level.' can be split into two sentences.
coherence cohesion
Avoid redundancy, such as 'the below attached my contact details,' which can be simplified to 'the contact details provided below.'
task achievement
You have effectively covered all the required points: explaining why you are writing, describing your experience and qualifications, and explaining how they can contact you.
task achievement
The letter maintains a polite and professional tone throughout, which is suitable for a job application.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite