In most parts of the world people are living longer. What are the possible causes of this situation? Is this a negative or positive development?
During all time of human history, people wanted to live forever.
This
days lifetime increases, it must be admitted. Unfortunately not everywhere. And what is a result of long and short life, we will discuss and see it now.
If we will compare the lifetime range in an average of cause it's longer than before. For, instance it's increased from 50 years to 70 years all around the world last
100 years. What is the result of this
effect? Of course
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quality became better and better. One important change is in the health service Correct pronoun usage
their live
such
as modern pharmacies, new health care methods , due to this
a quantity of death decreases, which is in itself increases lifetime. So in this
case we can say - humans dream to live forever closer and closer.
However
, it's strange to get this
mind, but due to nations living more than before, earth population face a range of new trouble, such
as overpopulation, and lessness of earth resources which is in itself a worrying challenge. Now the crowd of elderly society who can not work also
become more and more, which lead to young peoples have to perform more than the previous wave of workers. And ,unfortunately
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this
trend will be a pressing matter in future, furthermore
most old people because they are healthier can work more than before this
is creat another issue for youth like unemployment. This
is lead to joblessness and social unrest, economic instability.
In, a
conclusion we have to Correct article usage
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, that long life leads to new complications. But due to these new Change the form of the verb
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trouble. And new technologies look to solve those new challenges, we have to just believe it, we haven't another way.Submitted by azakgzuu on
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