some people think that libraries are a waste of ressources and money. so computers should replace them. however,others do not agree. discuss both sides and give your opinion

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On the cutting ,edge everyone relies on technical things
such
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as
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.Many individuals consider that spending money on
libraries
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is no more well
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of money and resources,
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of it they should shift towards the
computers
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,but on the other ,side many are not thinking same.It will be discussed in the below paragraphs.
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and foremost,in the modern ,era nobody have time to go to the library and read
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,people
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their mobiles phones and
computers
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via the internet to reading
books
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and newspapers.They considered
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computers
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give vast of options to understand and read
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as well as newspapers.
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newspaper via the internet gives knowledge about one fact and related facts at the same moment,which is not possible in many reading
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manually in
libraries
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.
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,many
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are located in different places,which is very difficult to reach that places at a particular time,but
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on laptops and ,
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you can
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them anywhere and any time instantly.
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,some of the groups do not agree with the above statement, because they considered
libraries
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are constructed only for reading,it provides an adequate environment for reader and learner but in the case of
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,advertisements on particular sites often disturb the reader,which is not good for the concentration power.
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but not least, it is noticed that the body posture of the reader who often read
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in the
libraries
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have better than who used
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and other devices.
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,if a person read a book it is mandatory to keep the distance between the book and the eyes at least one meter,which helps to make a posture. In the nutshell, in
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technical world people prefer to
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computers
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and many other electronic gadgets for their daily routine like to read newspapers and
books
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.
Nevertheless
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,
libraries
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are still playing an important role undoubtedly in every man's life.
Libraries
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give an adequate environment for readers which is difficult for those who used
computers
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to reading.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • resources
  • digital literacy
  • cultural hub
  • physical books
  • tactile learning
  • cost-effective
  • digitization
  • digital divide
  • environmental impact
  • hybrid model
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