some people think that libraries are a waste of ressources and money. so computers should replace them. however,others do not agree. discuss both sides and give your opinion
On the cutting ,edge everyone relies on technical things
such
as computers
.Many individuals consider that spending money on libraries
is no more well use
of money and resources,instead
of it they should shift towards the computers
,but on the other ,side many are not thinking same.It will be discussed in the below paragraphs.
First
and foremost,in the modern ,era nobody have time to go to the library and read books
,people use
their mobiles phones and computers
via the internet to reading books
and newspapers.They considered,
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apply
computers
give vast of options to understand and read books
as well as newspapers.For instance
newspaper via the internet gives knowledge about one fact and related facts at the same moment,which is not possible in many reading books
manually in libraries
.In addition
,many libraries
are located in different places,which is very difficult to reach that places at a particular time,but on the other hand
on laptops and ,computers
you can use
them anywhere and any time instantly.
However
,some of the groups do not agree with the above statement, because they considered libraries
are constructed only for reading,it provides an adequate environment for reader and learner but in the case of computers
,advertisements on particular sites often disturb the reader,which is not good for the concentration power.Last
but not least, it is noticed that the body posture of the reader who often read books
in the libraries
have better than who used computers
and other devices.For example
,if a person read a book it is mandatory to keep the distance between the book and the eyes at least one meter,which helps to make a posture.
In the nutshell, in this
technical world people prefer to use
computers
and many other electronic gadgets for their daily routine like to read newspapers and books
.Nevertheless
,libraries
are still playing an important role undoubtedly in every man's life.Libraries
give an adequate environment for readers which is difficult for those who used computers
to reading.Submitted by vivek16793 on
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