Smoking not only harms the smoker but also those who are nearby, there fore smoking should be banned in public places. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Smoking became a hot topic nowadays because of ascending number of smokers around the globe. There's a group of people saying that not only those who
smoke
face's consequences but those who are nearby may it's harmful to them too and for this
reason smoking must be banned in public places. I totally agree with the statement and will tell in detail in this
essay.
While, living in developing countries smoking it became mandatory for those who are continuously under stress due to their hectic lifestyle so youngsters and adults do smoke
everywhere, whenever they get timeAdd the comma(s)
, therefore,
therefore
they even don't care where they are smoking like while doing in the garden or near the school or near to our dear ones may they don't have that much immunity to defend themselves with this
smoke
which mainly contains tobacco which direct enter via the nose and increase cancers
bacteria. To exemplify, in the USA every job sector has its own smoking zone so they can do which harming anyone. Due to this
maybe non-smoker get relief from that smoke
.
In addition
, there are some person who gets more effect by cigarette like they feel omitting or maybe they don't want their children's to make up a mind to do smoking because there's a trend ongoing like if one person is doing this
may be this
should help me so i
must do that so maybe their children will follow if they are around people like Change the capitalization
I
this
. Basically smoking directly affect our nervous system and make our mind do that and eventually it does not just harm ourselves even others too. Even if cigarette companies made a note in their every single box that to do smoke
by on your own risk and may this
harmful to you by different cancers
like mouth cancers
,tongue cancers
etc. Which indirectly says that is
not good for anyone.
To conclude, maybe smoking became an integral part of our lives but people still want smoking should be banned because this
will affect the bodies and even it will destroy their children's life if smoking is not banned in public places.Submitted by parthsharma978 on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite