Some people think that wild animals should not be kept in zoos, others believe that there are good reasons for having zoos. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is argued by some that habitats for wildlife should be free rather than kept in

zoos

. Others suggest that

zoos

have an integral role in the lives of wild

animals

.

Although

the preservation of wild

animals

leads to financial strain and the

extinction

of their natural instincts, I believe that

zoos

play an important role in the protection of

animals

that are on the brink of

extinction

and in creating job opportunities for jobless people.  These days, keeping wild

animals

in

zoos

is no longer necessary

due to

several reasons. First of all, financial difficulties are being caused by these creatures in the budget of the government, leading to the loss of attention to some significant fields,

such

as education and health care services.

Therefore

,

instead

of supplying food and special zones, directing money to other realms can be more valuable in many ways.

Additionally

, most wild

animals

have a tendency to lose their natural instincts in

zoos

because of the limited space, which may change the way they eat, live, and even hunt, which is far more dangerous for wildlife. As an example, some

animals

,

such

as penguins, polar bears, and lions, require independence in the way of their lives, meaning that it's impossible to offer

such

facilities to them. 

However

, the construction of houses for wildlife habitats can yield a great deal of outcomes for the government and

animals

alike.

Initially

, in

this

developing world, the

extinction

of

animals

is soaring rapidly, causing the complete loss of different types of species,

such

as white rhinoceros and bears, which have ended their life cycle totally.

In other words

, the preservation of

animals

that are on the brink of

extinction

in

zoos

might help them live longer by being looked after carefully and safely by special staff.

Zoos

are

also

a place to make a profit for the public because

zoos

often depend on many trained workers opening job

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doors for the public,

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them with fiscal aid.

For example

, people who live in

zoos

nearby may benefit a lot. Ultimately, having

zoos

across the world may be the main culprit for saving endangered

animals

. In conclusion,

while

zoos

seem to be the main reason for

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waste of money and their instinct loss, I think that rare

animals

and some

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people mainly rely on

zoos

.