Many people believe that spending a lot of money on weddings is fine, while others completely disagree. Discuss both views and give your own opinion and examples.

Nowadays, several
people
thinking
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think
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that
consume
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consuming
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more
money
on
marriages
are good whereas, some
people
totally
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are totally
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against
on
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apply
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this
. In my opinion, I am
strongily
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strongly
against for high
expense
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expenses
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on
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of
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marriages
.
In
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This
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this
essay will give detailed
suggetions
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suggestions
regarding
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the opposit
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opposite
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opposit
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opposite
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of lavishness on
marriages
in the following paragraphs.
Firstly
,wasting more
money
is useless on
marriages
since it
create
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creates
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an unethical message in public and
also
leads to
make
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making
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some social issues.
Moreover
, giving more dowry on matrimony
which
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apply
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spread wrong messages in the society unless
,
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apply
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marriages
are not possible without it.If
this
trend can destroy while,use
this
money
for another
soical
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social
work.
For instance
,In
India
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,India
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a famous businessman made his daughter
marriage
recently with huge expenditure for invitation cards which expense approximately comes
twenty five
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thousand for one card and he invited more than fifty thousand
people
use
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to use
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by
this
card which is
tottaly
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totally
losing
money
unnecessarily.
Secondly
,
this
trend makes
descrimination
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discrimination
in between rich and poor since everyone forced themselves to spend
money
beyond
thier
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their
financial limit to show their social status and it
casue
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cause
came
to poor
people
become more poor
interms
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in terms
of
money
after
maariage
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marriage
.
On the other hand
,several
people
trusting
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trust
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that increase
social
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the social
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value if put more expense on
marriage
ceremonies and
they
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apply
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celebrating
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celebrate
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marriage
functions as much as they can.They depend
banks
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on banks
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or
other source
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another source
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to borrow
money
with
higher
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the higher
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interest
rate
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rates
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to
marriage
feast
eventhough
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even though
facing some financial problems.
For Example
,In Kerala,one retired army man who
done
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did
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his daughter
marriage
as
high level
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high-level
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programs,
for
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apply
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it
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apply
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he
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apply
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borrowed
huge
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a huge
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amount from the local financier pledge with property
although
he faced critical financial conditions.
This
tendency
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spread
spreaded
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spread
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all across and
people
likes
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like
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to spend
money
for
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on
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the
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apply
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marriages
. In conclusion,
its
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it's
it is
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totally a disastrous situation in
this
sociey
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society
and the government should
impliment
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implement
a law against
this
aptitude to deprive
from
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apply
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the public and monitor
strictly
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it strictly
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it should not
happens
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happen
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in future.
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