Many people believe that spending a lot of money on weddings is fine, while others completely disagree. Discuss both views and give your own opinion and examples.
Nowadays, several
people
thinking
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think
consume
more Wrong verb form
consuming
money
on marriages
are good whereas, some people
totally
against Add a missing verb
are totally
on
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apply
this
. In my opinion, I am strongily
against for high Correct your spelling
strongly
expense
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expenses
on
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of
marriages
.In
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This
this
essay will give detailed suggetions
regarding Correct your spelling
suggestions
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the opposit
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opposite
opposit
of lavishness on Correct your spelling
opposite
marriages
in the following paragraphs.
Firstly
,wasting more money
is useless on marriages
since it create
an unethical message in public and Change the verb form
creates
also
leads to make
some social issues.Change the verb form
making
Moreover
, giving more dowry on matrimony which
spread wrong messages in the society unlessCorrect pronoun usage
apply
,
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apply
marriages
are not possible without it.If this
trend can destroy while,use this
money
for another soical
work.Correct your spelling
social
For instance
,In India
a famous businessman made his daughter Add a comma
,India
marriage
recently with huge expenditure for invitation cards which expense approximately comes twenty five
thousand for one card and he invited more than fifty thousand Add a hyphen
twenty-five
people
use
by Add the particle
to use
this
card which is tottaly
losing Correct your spelling
totally
money
unnecessarily.Secondly
,this
trend makes descrimination
in between rich and poor since everyone forced themselves to spend Correct your spelling
discrimination
money
beyond thier
financial limit to show their social status and it Correct your spelling
their
casue
to poor Correct your spelling
cause
came
people
become more poor interms
of Correct your spelling
in terms
money
after maariage
.
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marriage
On the other hand
,several people
trusting
that increase Wrong verb form
trust
social
value if put more expense on Add an article
the social
marriage
ceremonies and they
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apply
celebrating
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celebrate
marriage
functions as much as they can.They depend banks
or Change preposition
on banks
other source
to borrow Change the wording
another source
other sources
money
with higher
interest Add an article
the higher
rate
to Fix the agreement mistake
rates
marriage
feast eventhough
facing some financial problems.Correct your spelling
even though
For Example
,In Kerala,one retired army man who done
his daughter Wrong verb form
did
marriage
as high level
programs, Add a hyphen
high-level
for
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apply
it
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apply
he
borrowed Correct pronoun usage
apply
huge
amount from the local financier pledge with property Correct article usage
a huge
although
he faced critical financial conditions.This
tendency Correct your spelling
spread
spreaded
all across and Correct your spelling
spread
people
likes
to spend Change the verb form
like
money
for
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on
the
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apply
marriages
.
In conclusion,its
totally a disastrous situation in Replace the word
it's
it is
this
sociey
and the government should Correct your spelling
society
impliment
a law against Correct your spelling
implement
this
aptitude to deprive from
the public and monitor Change preposition
apply
strictly
it should not Correct pronoun usage
it strictly
happens
in future.Wrong verb form
happen
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